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--- translations:diggy_diggy_hole [2022/03/31 16:55] – morgoth
+++ translations:diggy_diggy_hole [2024/10/12 17:32] (current) – [Nûrlâm translation] morgoth
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 ===== Nûrlâm translation =====
-Obviously, "dwarf" is replaced with "orc" (= "uruk") in translation. Imagine this being sung by orcs of Goblin-town or Moria (which is referenced in original text and animation). Also I allowed myself to replace one occurrence of "diggy, diggy hole" with "pushdug pushdug ronk" to reference Tolkien's [[:orcish_curse|Orc-curse]]. [[:syntax_analytic|Analytical style]] was used to match original song rhythm.
+Obviously, "dwarf" is replaced with "orc" (= "uruk") in translation. Imagine this being sung by orcs of Goblin-town or Moria (which is referenced in original text and animation). Also I allowed myself to replace one occurrence of "diggy, diggy hole" with "pushdug pushdug ronk" to reference Tolkien's [[:orcish_curse|Orc-curse]]. There are few minor errors to match original song's rhythm.
 <WRAP center round todo 60%>
-<todo !>make some rhymes or alliteration</todo>
+<todo !>make more rhymes or alliteration</todo>
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   [Chorus:]
-  Dakul uruk agh dakîb nâd bagronk
+  Dakul uruk agh dakîb nâd' bagronk
   Pushdug, pushdug ronk, pushdug, pushdug ronk
   Dakul uruk agh darong ash bagronk
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   Nozdaga dhung, ghalbaga moizor fipûrz
   Ghâmp kulâ dakob khau; rodum thôlubâ khadum
-  Tadak dogrîzumir; gihogub gib dûmp
+  Tadak dogrîzumir*; gihogub gib dûmp
   Daknarfurg amash fauthâ lata
   Daknarpâsh rongut mag nûz
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   [Chorus 2x]
+(*) "maukrîzumir" is also possible
 ===== Interlinear glossing and translation back =====
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 ^ Nûrlâm ^ Gloss ^ English ^
-| Honkdab, honkdab gâkh îmgomb! | brother=1PL.GEN brother=1PL.GEN let's REFL=rejoice | |
+| Honkdab, honkdab gâkh îmgomb! | brother=1PL.GEN brother=1PL.GEN let's REFL=rejoice | My brothers, my brothers, let's rejoice! |
-| Lûzh, lûzh, lûzh dasha | swing swing swing 1SG=COM | |
+| Lûzh, lûzh, lûzh dasha | swing swing swing 1SG=COM | Swing, swing, swing with me |
-| Tulk gib tamb agh tulk gib mog! | raise 2PL.GEN pick and raise 2PL.GEN voice | |
+| Tulk gib tamb agh tulk gib mog! | raise 2PL.GEN pick and raise 2PL.GEN voice | Raise your pick and raise your voice! |
-| Lash, lash, lash dasha | sing sing sing 1SG=COM | |
+| Lash, lash, lash dasha | sing sing sing 1SG=COM | Sing, sing, sing with me |
-| Dhu agh dhu nûrmum-ishi | down and down deep-DEF=ILL | |
+| Dhu agh dhu nûrmum-ishi | down and down deep-DEF=ILL | Down and down into the deep |
-| Mai golâ mash gimbat lata? | who know.deeply-3SG what find-GERV beneath | |
+| Mai golâ mash gimbat lata? | who know.deeply-3SG what find-GERV beneath | Who knows what is about to find beneath? |
-| Kanb, lûr, kalk agh makar | ruby, gold, diamond and many.CMPR | |
+| Kanb, lûr, kalk agh makar | ruby, gold, diamond and many.CMPR | Rubies, gold, diamonds and many more |
-| Rodfolkumor shkalaga | mountain+store=INE hide-PTCP.PST.PASS | |
+| Rodfolkumor shkalaga | mountain+store=INE hide-PTCP.PST.PASS | Hidden in mountain store |
 | |||
-| Nozdaga dhung, gazhbaga gundzûzbo, | beget-PTCP.PST.PASS underground suckle-PTCP.PST.PASS stone+teat=ABL | |
+| Nozdaga dhung, gazhbaga gundzûzbo, | beget-PTCP.PST.PASS underground suckle-PTCP.PST.PASS stone+teat=ABL | Born underground, suckled from stone teat |
-| Ûrthaga burzumor, bharnurm rodkîfob dakob | raise-PTCP.PST.PASS dark-DEF=INE save-NZ.ABST mountain+home 1PL=GEN | |
+| Ûrthaga burzumor, bharnurm rodkîfob dakob | raise-PTCP.PST.PASS dark-DEF=INE save-NZ.ABST mountain+home 1PL=GEN | Raised in the dark, safety of our mountain home |
-| Daft kulâ onk, yazg takhor dakob | skin be-3SG iron steel bone=INE 1PL=GEN | |
+| Daft kulâ onk, yazg takhor dakob | skin be-3SG iron steel bone=INE 1PL=GEN | Skin is iron, steel in our bones |
-| Rongut, rongut sligâtak | dig-INF dig-INF free-3SG=1PL.OBJ | |
+| Rongut, rongut sligâtak | dig-INF dig-INF free-3SG=1PL.OBJ | To dig, to dig makes us free |
-| Honk, gâkh lash ash laush dasha! | brother let's sing one song 1SG=COM | |
+| Honk, gâkh lash ash laush dasha! | brother let's sing one song 1SG=COM | Brothers, let's sing a song with me! |
 | |||
-| Dakul uruk agh dakîb nâd bagronk | 1SG=be orc and 1SG=live inside cesspool/dung-pit/dungeon/torture chamber | |
+| Dakul uruk agh dakîb nâd bagronk | 1SG=be orc and 1SG=live inside cesspool/dung-pit/dungeon/torture chamber | I am orc and I live in dung-pit |
-| Pushdug, pushdug ronk, pushdug, pushdug ronk | stinking stinking pit stinking stinking pit | |
+| Pushdug, pushdug ronk, pushdug, pushdug ronk | stinking stinking pit stinking stinking pit | Stinky, stinky pit, stinky, stinky pit |
-| Dakul uruk agh darong ash bagronk | 1SG=be orc and 1SG=dig one cesspool/dung-pit/dungeon/torture chamber | |
+| Dakul uruk agh darong ash bagronk | 1SG=be orc and 1SG=dig one cesspool/dung-pit/dungeon/torture chamber | I am orc and I'm digging a dung-pit |
-| Rongûrz, rongûrz ronk, darong ash ronk | diggy diggy pit 1SG=dig one pit | |
+| Rongûrz, rongûrz ronk, darong ash ronk | diggy diggy pit 1SG=dig one pit | Diggy diggy pit, I'm digging a pit |
 | |||
-| Ûzhghâzh za dhun narbarlubâ | sun+light this low NEG-reach-FUT-3SG | |
+| Ûzhghâzh za dhun narbarlubâ | sun+light this low NEG-reach-FUT-3SG | Sun light will not reach this low |
-| Nûz, nûz krond-ishi | deep deep mine=ILL | |
+| Nûz, nûz krond-ishi | deep deep mine=ILL | Deep, deep into mine |
-| Naril kinû shilghâzh ulb | never see-3PL moon+light blue | |
+| Naril kinû shilghâzh ulb | never see-3PL moon+light blue | Is's never seen (the) blue moon light |
-| Uruk narskoir târ | orc NEG-fly high | |
+| Uruk narskoir târ | orc NEG-fly high | Orcs don't fly high |
-| Gûk ash gulf agh sûrb mûd mirb | fill one glass and pour some mead | |
+| Gûk ash gulf agh sûrb mûd mirb | fill one glass and pour some mead | Fill a glass and pour some mead |
-| Dhîl thûn dakob birtumor | stuff belly 1PL=GEN feast-DEF=INE | |
+| Dhîl thûn dakob birtumor | stuff belly 1PL=GEN feast-DEF=INE | Stuff bellies at the feast |
-| Told kîfu agh thulor | stumble home=ALL and over-sleep | |
+| Told kîfu agh thulor | stumble home=ALL and over-sleep | Stumble to home and fall asleep |
-| Taurug dakob rodgoizor | dream-PTCP.PRES 1PL=GEN mountain+city=INE | |
+| Taurug dakob rodgoizor | dream-PTCP.PRES 1PL=GEN mountain+citadel.city=INE | Dreaming in our mountain keep |
 | |||
-| Nozdaga dhung, ghalbaga moizor fipûrz | beget-PTCP.PST.PASS underground grow-PTCP.PST.PASS womb=INE rock-ADJ | |
+| Nozdaga dhung, ghalbaga moizor fipûrz | beget-PTCP.PST.PASS underground grow-PTCP.PST.PASS womb=INE rock-ADJ | Born underground, grown in rocky womb |
-| Ghâmp kulâ dakob khau; rodum thôlubâ khadum | earth be-3SG 1PL=GEN bed mountain-DEF become-FUT-3SG tomb-DEF | |
+| Ghâmp kulâ dakob khau; rodum thôlubâ khadum | earth be-3SG 1PL=GEN bed mountain-DEF become-FUT-3SG tomb-DEF | Earth is our cradle, the mountain will become the tomb |
-| Tadak dogrîzumir; gihogub gib dûmp | face=3PL.OBJ battle+field=ADE 2PL=meet-FUT 2PL=GEN doom | |
+| Tadak dogrîzumir/maukrîzumir; gihogub gib dûmp | face=3PL.OBJ battle+field=ADE 2PL=meet-FUT 2PL=GEN doom | Face us on battle field, you will meet your doom |
-| Daknarfurg amash fauthâ lata | 1PL=NEG-fear what lurk-1SG beneath | |
+| Daknarfurg amash fauthâ lata | 1PL=NEG-fear what lurk-1SG beneath | We don't fear what lurks beneath |
-| Daknarpâsh rongut mag nûz | 1PL=NEG-can dig-INF too deep | |
+| Daknarpâsh rongut mag nûz | 1PL=NEG-can dig-INF too deep | We can't dig too deep |
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